She fell. She fell hard. Jackie was walking in the woods on her way home from work. The air was dense with some mist in the late afternoon. Odd she thought, there isn't usually mist or fog at this time of day. Capturing the feeling of the moment she passed her local partk. "I might take a little detour on the way home today" she thought. In she stepped into the pathway of the park, and for a few moments she thought what a waste of time this is, to step into the park when she could be at home under her blanket on the couch with the television turned on watching "her stories". But then again, she hadn't been to this particular park before. Noticed it sure, but been no.
The park opened through the pathway lined by heavy ccedrer trees. Grass, recently mowed expanded out into a small field. In the distance, an eerie kind of swing set was off by the thick cover of fog. Over she walked, through the grass which was now somewhat saturated by dew and the moisture from the fog above. Eventually she got to the swing set. It was old, paint peeling all over the place. Beneath it a perfectly clean surface of saned. She noticed thtat the swing hadn't been used in a lvery long time. How did she know? she could just tell, the white tinge of old sun damaged plastic remained on the red seat, with no indication of friction from any persons pants.
She glanced up because a shimmer came from the thick brush and ceders behind the swing set. A red sort of glow had caught her eye. "No way in hell am I going in there to check this thing out" she shthought. "It's already enoguh with this murderous style fog that's cast over, and then this swingset to boot. I'm not going to be a main character in the next horror best seller" she exclaimed to her self. But the curiosity was too much. She set on through the brush towards the red glow.
The glow was far set back in the forrest, but the ceders had opened up. She could still see the glowe, it was pulsing. As she got closer to it she noticed a concrete small structure. A grey steel door and 1m of concrete blocks all around it was all that stood. She sapproached it. Now seeing the breath jfrom her panicing self. This is a murder scenario she kept thinking. But the curisosity was still too capturing. She went dforward, opened the door with the chrome cdoor handle. Darkness was inside. ShGo home? Go in?
Go in she swent, and with that sent her tumbling down the dark sdepths of a 1st floor fall. Bang her head hit. And then looking up, the red light was off. Had the power gone out?
The 10-minute version
She fell. She fell hard. Jackie was walking in the woods on her way home from work. The air was dense with some mist in the late afternoon. Odd she thought, there isn't usually mist or fog at this time of day. Capturing the feeling of the moment she passed her local partk. "I might take a little detour on the way home today" she sthought. In she stepped into the parthway of the park, and for a few moenments she thought what a waste of time this is, to step into the park when she could be at home under her blanket on the couch with the Televeionsion turned on watching "her stories". But then again, she hadn't been to this particular park before. Noticed it sure, but been no.
The park opened through the pathway lined by heavy ccedrer trees. Grass, recently mowed expanded out into a small field. In the distant an eery kind of swing set was odff by the thick cover of fog. Over she walked, through the grass which was now somewhat saturated by dew and the moisture from the dog above. Eventually she got to the swing set. It was old, paint peeling all over the place. Beneath it a perfectly clean surface of saned. She noticed thtat the swing hadn't been used in a lvery long time. How did she know? she could just tell, the white tinge of old sun damaged plastic remained on the red seat, with no indication of friction from any persons pants.
She glanced up because a shimmer came from the thick brush and ceders behind the swing set. A red sort of glow had caught her eye. "No way in hell am I going in there to check this thing out" she shthought. "It's already enoguh with this murderous style fog that's cast over, and then this swingset to boot. I'm not going to be a main character in the next horror best seller" she exclaimed to her self. But the curiosity was too much. She set on through the brush towards the red glow.
The glow was far set back in the forrest, but the ceders had opened up. She could still see the glowe, it was pulsing. As she got closer to it she noticed a concrete small structure. A grey steel door and 1m of concrete blocks all around it was all that stood. She sapproached it. Now seeing the breath jfrom her panicing self. This is a murder scenario she kept thinking. But the curisosity was still too capturing. She went dforward, opened the door with the chrome cdoor handle. Darkness was inside. ShGo home? Go in?
Go in she swent, and with that sent her tumbling down the dark sdepths of a 1st floor fall. Bang her head hit. And then looking up, the red light was off. Had thwe power gone out?